初哥哥的長跑比賽

By 張智霖

評判一聲開始 忘記過去唏噓
湖岸作背景選手向着一方往前去
呆看着人潮漸退
場內見你影子 時間彷彿終止
純粹得已經將這片段不知不覺間
打印於腦內不消散
來換對跑鞋 來跑過
某海天一色某壯闊山坡
由光線 全身梳洗我
如泄氣你要記緊休息啊 再來跑過
然後轉了急彎 然後擦過海灘
然後發覺秋天輕駕着秋風降臨了
白晝未淡忘夜晚
何以我倆只懂 朝拜幹勁的衝
何以我倆不可於美麗空間中抱擁
讓結果燦爛的失控
除下了跑鞋 來擁過
這海天一色這壯闊山坡
由光線 全身梳洗我
如愛這你我只需找一趟 再來跑過
完結鐘聲響起 名冊記載當中
猶有兩個選手將這長跑比賽忘掉
偷走了靜悄
About This Song

"" by (Zhang Zhi Lin) encapsulates the emotional rollercoaster of love, competition, and the passage of time through the metaphor of a long-distance race. The song navigates themes of nostalgia, longing, and fleeting moments, as the protagonist reflects on both the challenges of the metaphorical race and the beauty of shared experiences with a loved one. It emphasizes the emotional highs and lows, underscoring how memories can linger like a race that never truly concludes, remaining imprinted in one's mind.

The narrative unfolds as a poignant story of two 'runners' who, despite being caught in the whirlwind of life and competition, find solace in each other's presence. The lyrics illustrate a slow descent into introspection, with vivid imagery of landscapes that serve as a backdrop to their shared journey. Each turn and moment is filled with yearning and vigor, highlighting the notion that the competition is not just about victory but about the connections made along the way. The song elegantly captures the bittersweet nature of human relationships, as it questions why the two cannot fully embrace their love amidst the pressures of life.

Musically, the track employs a gentle, uplifting melody complemented by engaging rhythms, which mirror the cadence of running and the ebb and flow of emotions in the lyrics. Lyrical techniques such as vivid metaphors and imagery create a palpable sense of nostalgia, inviting listeners to visualize their own experiences. The repetition of certain phrases evokes emotional resonance while simultaneously providing a sense of continuity, akin to the repetitive nature of running in a race, reinforcing the song's central themes of perseverance and connection.

Culturally, the song touches on the universal aspects of love and competition that resonate across different societies. The metaphor of a 'long-distance race' is symbolic not only in the context of romantic endeavors but also in the broader scope of life's challenges. In a fast-paced world, the longing for connection and meaningful experiences is something that transcends language and cultural barriers. Zhang Zhi Lin's song serves as a gentle reminder to cherish the moments we share with loved ones, even if they seem to slip away like fleeting seconds on the clock.